❔❔Hey guys I have a short story I had to ✍ for English just a random one.❔❔ Can you guys give me some advice or feedback on it plz. It is attached below as a document:

Explain the effect of the rhetorical questins for the below paragraph."i pinched myself: was i still alive? was i awake? how was it possible that men, women, and children were beiing burned and that the world kept silent? no. all this could not be real. a nightmare soon i would wake up with a start, my heart pounding, and find that i waas back in the room of my childhood, with my "