Read the first two steps in writing a rebuttal. What is the third step in crafting an effective rebuttal?
1. Acknowledge the counterclaim a reader might have.
2. Provide a reason the counterclaim is weak.
O Restate the original claim and one piece of
supporting evidence.
Present evidence to support this reason and refute
the counterclaim.
O Explain that the counterclaim is incorrect and restate
the claim
O Provide a list of other authors who agree with the
claim and its reasons.

the way you did it is okay (not really the best) but it could use a little work.

explanation:

dreams can say a lot about the personalities,thoughts, feelings, and intentions of people, what exactly do dreams mean? are the dreams we have   a result of our thinking process or are they connected to our hidden desires? facts and fiction will be used to uncover the truth behind our dreams.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

i will have to go with 1.

hope this !