Which passage violates all of the rules of concise and precise writing? A. The barely moving train seemed, in my humble and lowly opinion,
as I am not a train expert, to be having some seriously disturbing
trouble with the process of track changing, and the whole train
also needed a really good washing and professionally done paint
job.
B. That train was creeping along the track as it tried to change tracks
successfully
C. The moving train seemed to be having some trouble changing
tracks, and it needed a good paint job.
D. None of the above are correct.

The main themes of the play are: fate and free will with the inevitability of oracular predictions is a theme that often occurs in greek tragedies the conflict between the individual and the state similar to that in sophocles’ “antigone” and   people’s willingness to ignore painful truths both oedipus and jocasta clutch at unlikely details in order to avoiding facing up to the inceasingly apparent truth and sight and blindness the irony that the blind seer tiresius can actually “see” more clearly than the supposedly clear-eyed oedipus, who is in reality blind to the truth about his origins and his inadvertent crimes.

Are you asking for a opinion ? if so i believe that a speaker should be genuine and honest about what they're saying and should be factual