READ AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK there were two girls who loved paranormal things. they read every blog, book, and watched every video on ghosts and other paranormal creatures.
they came accross one particular picture that caught their eye.
it shows an old abandoned fair ground.
they look at the pictures and see that the rides are still there, but not safe to use they look closer at the picture and see a shadowy figure that seems to be a clown, except its translucent.
they see the address.
"hey thats where we live" one of the girls say "yeah it is we should go" the other says.
when they get to the fair ground they hear a faint laughing sound
"what was that" asked one of the girls.
"it was probably just wind hitting an old ride or something calm down"
they look at a fun house.
the paint is chiping and the wood is peeling.
"lets go in there"
they walk in and the lights flicker, the music starts up in a slow and eerie way.
they look around.
they see broken mirrors and and old decorations on the ground.
they look at one of the walls and see red handprints smeared all over the wall and red spots on the floor.
"i...is that b...blood"
"i dont know"
they brush it off as some kind of prank by teenagers.
they go farther into the fun house and see more handprints and spots.
"we should go..."
right as she said that they hear a voice
"why would you leave?"
they freeze.
they slowly walk backwards as a figure emmerges from the shadowy area into the flickering lights.
the light hits the figure and they see a clown.
half of his face looked smashed.
they stand motionless.
"dont you wanna play with the clown?"
they look at him as he steps closer to them they can see the flesh hanging off his face and the blood dripping from the wound.
"what happned to you" one of the girls force out.
he looks at her and frowns
"what happned?"
she nods
he looks at her
he steps closer to them
they see his costume its covered in blood stains and it looks really old its black and white
the other girl starts to cry
"i was thrown under the ferris wheele"
they look back at the ferris wheel and see blood and rust
"when were you killed?"
"1804"
"216 years ago"
the crying girl starts to tremble
"y...your chuckles"
the other girl joins in
"you were killed and they shut the carnival down 40 years ago because of paranormal activity"
he laughs
"b..because a kid fell under the ferris wheel"
"but he didnt fall did he?"
the clown puts his bloody glove covered finger over his mouth in a shush sign
he dissapers
the girls moved 1 week later

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  a basketball team comprises of five players as mentioned above. the five players include point guard, shooting guard, small forward, power forward and center (ramen 56). the rules do not limit players to certain locations. however, evolution of basketball from the 1980s made players assume certain locations and roles. the point guard should be the fastest team member, and is responsible for organizing the attacks of the team. he does this by making sure that the right player has the ball at the right time (wissel 87). the shooting guard creates mainly long-range shorts and watches the opponent's last player on the defense. the small forward member of the team is majorly responsible for scoring points through dribble penetration and cuts to the basket. he also rebounds and plays actively. power forward plays invasively having their back to the basket and when on defense he plays under the basket or against the opponent's power forward (ramen 54). the center often uses his size and height to score and safeguard the basket when on defense. however, there is no rule that limits the players to these descriptions.  

              there are four quarters in regular basketball game, and each takes 10 or 12 minutes (ramen 67). in college basketball games, the game uses two-twenty minute halves. extra time should take 5 minutes in all games except in high school, where it takes four minutes. teams need to change sides after the first half of the game. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive. at any given time, the court should have ten players, 5 from both sides. despite substitutions being unrestricted, it can only be performed when the game is stopped (wissel 51). additionally, teams must have a uniform comprising of a jersey and a pair of shorts. for identification purposes, the jersey should have a unique number in the team printed at the front and back. in some instances, the jerseys have the names of players, sponsors and team printed on them.  

              in conclusion, regulation basketball hoop comprises of a rim or basket attached to a backboard. violating the rules of the game results in a change of the shot clock if the committed by the defense or loss of ball possession. basketball teams comprise of five players, which includes the point guard, shooting guard, power forward, small forward and center. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive.