Can you plz edit my ending make it better plz

as i wander around the destroy kingdom of camelot looking for the sinful jabberwocky. i can see many different kinds of beasts and monsters in the kingdom like the dire wolfs and the green goblins but in front of them are the mythical jabberwocky. i quickly pull out the vorpal sword that my parent gave me then charge at the dire wolfs and the goblins, in one swing i manage to cut through all the dire wolf and the goblin, but then the jabberwocky swing it enormous tail at me that almost kill me but somehow i manage to dodge the strong jabberwocky tail then come the second tail of the jabberwocky swing at me knocking on the ground i got no more energy to stand up, i was powerless against the jabberwocky. as i close my eye thinking to myself “why would anyone trust me to kill the mythical jabberwocky” then a bright light overcome my mind without any hesitation i stand up and grab the vorpal sword. i swiftly jump forward to the jabberwocky as my sword whistles through the air and into the jabberwocky head. the jabberwocky head drop at the ground then i can feel that my body was running through emotion of relief but then i fainted without knowing it.

You could have said "I fainted in a puzzled. model

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sis. it's been a while since a read that and had that class so i can't answer for u