Cambria sang in her school’s talent showcase three songs making her grandparents proud.
which is the best revision of this sentence?
cambria made her grandparents proud when she sang three songs in her school’s talent showcase.
making her grandparents proud, cambria in her school’s talent showcase sung three songs.
three songs sung in the school’s talent showcase made cambria’s grandparents proud.
cambria sung three songs making her grandparents proud of the school’s talent showcase.

Proofread this excerpt from a review of the film tangled. what type of errors does it contain? walt disney studios is back with another delightful film sure to entertain children and adults alike, hat’s off to the writer and director of this charming little endeavor. they have effectively managed to breathe new life into an old classic: by giving rapunzel's tale a fresh twist, instead of the meek and rapunzel of the original disney story; this retelling gives us a spunky and assertive heroine ready to take command of her own life. a. mixed-up tenses b. incorrect verb usage c. spelling errors d. punctuation errors