Read the paragraph.

volunteering is a good way to gain skills and work experience. in a recent study, seventy-three percent of employers said they’d hire someone who’d volunteered. among employees who had volunteered, ninety-four percent said that they’d seen benefits at work. students looking to improve their resumes should consider volunteering.

which is the best way to revise the final sentence?

the transition “in fact” should be added to the beginning of the sentence to show the similarity among ideas in the paragraph.
the transition “as a result” should be added to the beginning of the sentence to sum up the argument in the paragraph.
a quotation should replace the sentence to further support the argument in the paragraph.
a fact should be added to the sentence to further support the argument in the paragraph.

The transition “as a result” should be added to the beginning of the sentence to sum up the argument in the paragraph.

The first few lines of the paragraph have successfully established that volunteering can bring many benefits to people looking for employment. Therefore, what comes next should be a conclusion. The conclusion is that students who are looking to improve their resumes should consider volunteering. However, in order to signal the connection between the conclusion and the previous statements, it would be good to include a transition phrase such as "as a result."

explanatithe story "two kinds" , revolves around a strict relationship between a mother and daughter. the mother tries very hard to make sure her daughter jing mei , is successful in life and lives up to her full potential. the story explores alot of different themes. though , there is one theme that really stands out. you cant force someone to be something that their not.

jing mei's mother was an immagrant from china. she moved to the united states to give her daughter , jing mei , a better and successful life for her. and being raised in china with their strict rules and striving to be perfect took a toll on her and her daughters relationship. she pressures her daughter to be great and perfect all the time but it gets really hard for her to live up to her mothers standards. her mother believes that jing mei can be a child prodigy and prepares her to be and act like one. furthermore , the story ends with jing mei getting everything off her chest and seeing the dissappointment in her mothers eyes as she finds out her daughter has not lived up to her full potential. and her mother has finally gained an understanding of her daughter.

tbh ur lucky i answered because you only gave 5 points. it should have been like 50.