Anyone that is really good at writing essay's.) Can someone look over my essay and help me add alittle more detail) " I have 370 words need 400). ( I POSTED A PICTURE OF WHAT I WROTE DOWN). " My teacher said I need to included - (Extremely vivid sensory language, Figurative language, Comparative and /or Superlative adverbs or adjectives, Stong word choice and appropriate voice, Tone and Style. Uses correct mechanics and grammar. She also said I didn't include ( Essay includes no revisions, or the revisions undermine the essay's purpose and weaken the draft. Use correct mechanics and grammar. 0-4 mistakes are present. WILL MARK BRAINLIEST. Need two people to respone so I can Mark Brainliest

Of all the attributes essential to a respected man or woman or to a respected nation, the predominant characteristic is self-discipline. laws cannot be made compelling people to suppress their desire for power or position. no method of legislating such wisdom exists. as free people, we must face a choice between two types of discipline. one is the self-discipline that is still open to us—the kind that free people and free nations exercise when they select the executives, lawmakers, and judges who will govern them and assure their protection and well-being. the second is a cold-blooded, ill-intentioned, form of discipline that may be thrust upon us by strangers—the discipline of force, terrorism, suspicion, and intimidation—the discipline used in totalitarian regimes. does every sentence following the first in some way support the theme?

Question 5 of 101 pointwhich of these describes how the introduction of the printing press affectedsociety? oa. more people could read about important civic events. oob. people had the ability to print and share their ideas. ooc. people could keep printed records of agricultural goods. ood. more people could influence the media of that time. submit

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