50 pts can someone pls Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.

Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.

Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

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Anybody the can attack when you are down or even when you don’t even expect it. No one even knows, but even maybe one of your own friends is like that. Some people just do this to be able to gain money, friends or maybe they just dislike you. Everyone knows at least one person like that. Anywhere you go, you will mostly but in to one.

“dear sir: it is with great reluctance, i trouble you on a subject, which does not fall within your province; but it is a subject that occasions me more distress, than i have felt, since the commencement of the war; and which loudly demands the most zealous exertions of every person of weight and authority, who is interested in the success of our affairs. i mean the present dreadful situation of the army for want of provisions, and the miserable prospects before us, with respect to futurity. it is more alarming than you will probably conceive, for, to form a just idea, it were necessary to be on the spot. for some days past, there has been little less, than a famine in camp. a part of the army has been a week, without any kind of flesh, and the rest for three or four days. naked and starving as they are, we cannot enough admire the incomparable patience and fidelity of the soldiery, that they have not been ere this excited by their sufferings, to a general mutiny or dispersion. strong symptoms, however, discontent have appeared in particular instances; and nothing but the most acitive efforts every where can long avert so shocking a catastrophe.” what’s the central idea?

Isaiah is a citizen of florida. he would like to propose a new amendment to his state's constitution to be voted on in the next election. is isaiah able to do this? no. the u. s. and florida constitutions do not allow citizens to add amendments to the state or federal ballot. no. the florida constitution says citizens may only propose new laws or amendments at local government meetings. yes. the florida and u. s. constitutions allow citizens to add amendments to be voted on in the next federal election. yes. the florida constitution allows citizens to propose amendments to the state constitution to be voted on in the next state election.

What recommendations would you give to your local community to to decrease the local effects of human impact on the environment? list 2 recommendations and how they will positively impact your community. 3. what recommendations would you give to the global governments to decrease the global effects of human impact on the environment? list 2 recommendations and how they will positively impact our planet.