Add adjectives and adverbs. Mark your new additions with an (Adj) or (Adv).
Make other revisions suggested in your Discussion-Based Assessment.
Write a reflection paragraph discussing changes you made during the revision process. Explain how you feel these changes improved your narrative

This story is about Two teens who live in New York City and find a buried time capsule with scratched-out words. The only words they could make out wore "He will prevail”. Intrigued they dragged the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and opened it and wen they saw. What was inside they looked at each other with hope in their eyes. That was the first time in years they had hope in their eyes.