Michelle dropped out of college on account of having to take a job and go to work to her family. what is the best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning? michelle dropped out of college on account of having to go to work to her family. michelle dropped out of college to take a job and go to work to her family. michelle dropped out of college to take a job to her family. michelle took a job to her family.

The best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning is C. Michelle dropped out of college to take a job to help her family.

Explanation:

When a sentence includes too many "useless" words, they may clutter writing and hinder comprehension. This excesive use of words is called wordiness, and could be avoided by writing simply and directly what the writer aims to convey.

In this case, sentence C is the best option because it conveys all the elements of the original sentence that carry meaning (Michelle, the fact that she dropped out of college and the fact that she took a job in order to help her family) without using any unnecessary connector, repetition or complex structure.

answer; i believe that the correct answer is ; unified

world bank is the correct answer.