Read a sentence from an argumentative essay. Caesar Augustus didn't like war, so he made sure people couldn't fight wars after he died. Which is the best example of how to revise the sentence to include formal language? The Roman guy wanted peace, so he created a treaty to protect Rome. Caesar Augustus created a peace treaty that couldn't be broken after his death. Caesar Augustus brought a peace to the Roman Empire that endured long after his death. The guy Caesar didn't want Rome to be at war after his death, so he created a lasting peace.

The smokey mountains have over 2,100 miles of rushing mountain streams and rivers that flow through the park. in each mile lives a diverse community of native fish, amphibians, insects, and larvae, some of which are found only in the southern appalachians. park managers and scientific researchers test many factors such as fish populations, the watersheds and water tests to determine a) too many lizards are present b) the water quality of the stream c) rainwater is running into local streams d) if visitors to the park are overstaying their welcome