Read the sentence. editing a film is similar to editing a novel: the editor puts together the pieces to create a wicked fun tale that you’d have to be nuts not to love, and also flows logically and smoothly. to put the sentence in formal style, which is the best choice to replace the underlined phrase?

The correct answer is a story that appeals to the audience.

Writing in formal style is more professional and requires formal, specific and adequate vocabulary. In the case of this sentence, when you use a story that appeals to the audience, it sounds more appropriate to replace for the type of audience that could be Reading it.

The formal style uses longer, more precisely sentences that better approach the topic at hand. The important points need to have an introduction, be more elaborate and have a conclusion.

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affirmative action refers to the policies that take gender, race, or ethnicity into account in order to promote equal opportunity.

employers subject to title vii are prohibited from taking race or sex into account in any employment decisions. aa is a penalty for having any job group substantially statistically "underutilized" in any race or either sex. the employer must take steps to eliminate the underutilization, then stop, ending its aa efforts