Can someone me come up with a thesis statement on an essay i wrote where i have to analyze the causes and effects of colonization throughout the british empire by examining its geography, economics, and culture, during the age of imperialism.

i wrote it twice but my teacher said the thesis statement isn't good enough so i really need .

What are generally your options about this situation during the essay?  What interests you about the geography, economy, and the culture of this age. Write your statement on how all these make you feel. A thesis statement is about your opinion so there should be no right or wrong answer, just about how you feel in this situation.

The constant presence of diseases or infectious agents within a given geographic area or population group. it may also refer to the usual prevalence of a given disease with such area or group. it includes holoendemic and hyperendemic diseases. a holoendemic disease is one for which a high prevalent level of infection begins early in life and affects most of the child population, leading to a state of equilibrium such that the adult population shows evidence of the disease much less commonly than do children (malaria in many communities is a holoendemic disease). a hyperendemic disease is one that is constantly present at a high incidence and/or prevalence rate and affects all groups equally. so probably family history.