Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. how would you improve it?
claim: the aztec empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the inca empire.
i. introduction
ii. aztec empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
c. cultural developments
iii. conclusion
a. add a section about the inca empire.
b. use more colorful language.
c. introduce new arguments in the conclusion.
d. have the conclusion immediately following the introduction

i really really really really really really dont know

(202 bc - 220 ad) dynasty started by lui bang; a great and long-lasting rule, it discarded the harsh policies of the qin dynasty and adopted confucian principles; han rulers chose officials who passed the civil service exams rather than birth; it was a time of prosperity

honestly i love the walking dead, mainly the quotes. “well, pardon me young man, excuse the [insert bad word here] out of my gosh darn french, but did you just threaten me? ” sksk (of course it's not the exact words)

where is the map at?