Read the sentence below about the Chicago fire of 1871.
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The city of Chicago was restored quickly after the fire.
The city of Chicago was restored after the fire of 1871,
as many structures were rebuilt at a rapid pace
Almost 2,000 wood and brick buildings were rebuilt
some time after the fire with the help of the residents of
Chicago
Following the Chimago fire, people worked extremely
hard to rebuild as quickly as possible, and they were
successful.
Almost 2,000 wood-frame buildings and 500 brick
structures were near completion by the end of 1871,
after the Chicago fire.
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