Directions: below you will see an example of thesis statements. you are to analyze
each and determine if they meet all of the requirements to be an appropriate thesis
statement, or if corrections should be made. note your answers in the area under
each statement. if you feel corrections to the thesis statement should be made, list
the needed changes as well.

"the civil war remains vastly different than any other conflict ever seen by the
united states. the widespread impact of war on citizens, the economy and the
landscape of america proves that the importance of the civil war is unique when
compared to other major conflicts of the past 200 years"

I think this is a good thesis and does not need to be altered. I believe all the requirements are met.

Hope this helps!  :)

Explanation:

the hollywood film industry of 1950 was threatened on several different fronts. television broadcasting was rapidly becoming the dominant entertainment medium in the united states. the paramount anti-trust consent decree requiring separate ownership for production companies and theater chains had gone into effect on 1 january 1950. large numbers of young men and women were marrying, having children, and moving to the suburbs, which affected the viability of downtown first-run movie theaters. foreign revenues were endangered by protectionist tactics including quota systems, high taxes, and blocked funds. finally, the morality and patriotism of hollywood films and filmmakers were under attack from government, religious, and citizens' groups.

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