Can someone please critique the advertisement for National Parks below. How could the advertisement be better? What feedback do you have to give to me?

People who utilizes the progression principle will ensure their exercise program increases in frequency, intensity, time, and type. the changes need to happen gradually in order to ensure they make gains in their fitness program. a person who doesn't utilize the progression principle can still gain health benefits from exercising, but will not continue to improve in cardiovascular fitness.

Starvation is bad because it makes your body unhealthy. if you don’t have a healthy diet you can age faster or even die before you’re 30.

Ithink it's traditional