Autumn and winter by dm

First impression your characters are gorgeous. If this is for feedback this is what I have for you. Instead of saying autumn colors you could say something like her house was covered in browns, reds, and yellows paying a tribute to the wonderful season she was named after. Another thing is the sentences are very short and choppy in the beginning so you might want to combine some of them. Also indent when you have different point of view changes in order to lessons the confusion. I really enjoyed the story although it is choppy all the way through making it difficult to fall into the story although it is a great concept. With a little revision it would be absolutely phenomenal

explanation:

two years ago, when picking flowers in the mountains back of yosemite valley, i found a book. it was blotted and storm-beaten; all of its outer pages were mealy and crumbly. the paper seemed to dissolve like the snow beneath which it had been buried, however; many of the inner pages were well preserved. and although all were more or less stained and torn, whole chapters were easily readable. this is the condition of the great open book of yosemite glaciers today; its granite pages have been torn and blurred by the same storms that wasted the castaway book.two years ago, when picking flowers in the mountains back of yosemite valley; i found a book. it was blotted and storm-beaten, all of its outer pages were mealy and crumbly. the paper seemed to dissolve like the snow beneath which it had been buried, however, many of the inner pages were well preserved. and although all were more or less stained and torn; whole chapters were easily readable. this is the condition of the great open book of yosemite glaciers today, its granite pages have been torn and blurred by the same storms that wasted the castaway book.

You didn't give the options btw