Is my french correct?

je voudrais nager, dessiner et faire ski nautique plus souvent.> > i would swim, draw, and water ski more often

i would like to add "to get better/in order to get better" at the end or even at the beginning of the sentence, but i dont know how. any suggestions?

i wanted to use "deviennent meilleurs"> to become better, but meilleur modifies nouns not

Bonjour

Je voudrais nager, dessiner et faire du ski nautique plus souvent.

This is CORRECT.

if you want to add to get better, you won't be able to use "meilleur" or you would have to change a lot because "meilleur" is an adjective.

example =

1- Pour avoir une vie meilleure (to have a better life), je voudrais nager , dessiner  et faire du ski nautique plus souvent.

une vie fem. sing. noun + meilleure

OR

2-Je voudrais nager, dessiner et faire du ski nautique plus souvent pour aller mieux. (to get better  / mieux is an adverb)

In the first example I wrote it at the beginning, because that's the best but I don't know how to explain why !!! but you can write it as the end as well, it's correct

in the 2nd, it must be at the end

hope I helped ☺☺☺

Bonjour,

Correct : Je voudrais nager, dessiner et faire du ski nautique plus souvent.

Je voudrais nager, dessiner et faire du ski nautique plus souvent pour aller mieux.

Afin d'avoir une vie meilleure , je voudrais nager , dessiner  et faire du ski nautique plus souvent.

hola amigo o amiga

explanation:

five points is hardly rich man but anyway lol