Lagos today.. comparison to rural nigeria

Which sentence should be revised to include vivid imagery

The caption is an example of which kind of bias? "cute baby boars snuffle for food in the undergrowth"

That alligator hungry. vittles very scarce that time a season. his belly be pinchin him hard, now. but bruh deer is fat, and so he is in heavy trouble. the alligator there in front of him. the beagles there behind him. what bruh deer gone do? he sees the alligator and he hears the beagles. how does the author readers understand what the word pinchin means?