Read the passage. dana wandered through the dark house feeling the wall for a light switch. she took several steps forward. where was it? she moved her hand up and down frantically on the wall. all dana could think was, “i can’t see! ” finally, she flipped the switch, and at the end of the long hallway stood a tall figure. dana cried out, “who are you? ” based on the supporting details, how do you think dana is feeling? scared happy bored sad

Scared

a pirate walks into a bar with a steering wheel sticking out of his pants.

bartender: isn't that uncomfortable?

pirate: arrgh! it's drivin' me nuts!

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.