Read this sentence from the passage. there is, first, the new york of the man or woman who was born here, who takes the city for granted and accepts its size and its turbulence as natural and inevitable. what is the effect of the author's choice of turbulence rather than commotion in this sentence? a. it more clearly explains the overall tension in the city. b. it better suggests the constant turmoil of the city. c. it better describes the changeable weather of the city. d. it more closely implies the busy nature of the city.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars. which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone