What is the best way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

Make sure the commas are placed where commas should be placed and the periods are placed where periods should be placed. Too many commas can get confusing and too many periods could mean too many pauses. Find the balance between the two.

the correct answer is c. usually the language, and its emotional insight, that is how feelings and attitudes are expressed through language, are not quite present in film adaptations. despite that, it is a factor that a fan may either not notice or not care much about, especially compared to the other factors.

as for symbolic actions, the narrator's tearing down the wallpaper in an attempt to find the "woman" in the wallpaper represents her struggle to retain or regain her sanity.   the wallpaper has been part of her confinement and by her tearing it down, she is freeing herself from that confinement.