Buddy rich has appeared in hollywood films symphony of swing (1939) ship ahoy (1942) louis armstrong how’s about it (1943) what is wrong with the passage? a. it lacks parallel structure. b. it has excessive coordination. c. a correlative conjunction is necessary. d. not all ideas are coordinate.

Which is wrong in this passage is that not all ideas are coordinated. Option D is correct.

Coordinated ideas refers to two or more ideas of the same value which are joined together in a sentence. To do so, coordinated conjuctions are employed, for instance: and, or.

Furthermore, other mistakes found in this passage are: the lack of commas while listing. besides, titles should be between quotation marks or they should be italicized.

pathos

explanation:

it appeals to emotion, sadnesses being that dolphins are being killed by these nets

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