English ? what should you check for in an essay revision? what should you check for in the editing process?

Rev. simon hosack] entered fully into the feeling of suffering and sorrow which took possession of me when i discovered that a girl weighed less in the scale of being than a boy, and he praised my determination to prove the contrary. which best describes society's view of boys' and girls' abilities during the period in which elizabeth cady stanton lived?

The brother of a presidential candidate writes an editorial in which he defends this candidate against charges of corruption. in such a circumstance, it is most appropriate for the reader to a) suspect that the candidate may have been framed. b) consider whether the candidate has the best family or not. c) wonder if the writer may be biased, due to his family connection. d) wonder if the writer may be inaccurate, due to wanting to get people to read his column. \

Unity in a paragraph means: my writing persuades my readers to agree with the argument i am presenting. the paragraph discusses and supports one thought throughout the entire paragraph. all sentences in a paragraph are the same length and structure. the first sentence and the last sentence echo the exact same thought.