Which comments are examples of constructive feedback? don't use dialogue when you write. it's childish. if you summarized the go-kart story instead, you could get to the real conflict sooner. when using dialogue, you don't always need to write "he said" and "she said." the context can often indicate who is talking. this essay is ok, but it doesn't have any action. chess tournaments are boring, so i don't think anyone will want to read this.

Read the excerpt from muir's essay "calypso borealis" and answer the question. [5] how long i sat beside calypso i don't know. hunger and weariness vanished, and only after the sun was low in the west i splashed on through the swamp, strong and exhilarated as if never more to feel any mortal care. at length i saw maple woods on a hill and found a log house. i was gladly received. "where ha ye come fra? the swamp, that awfu' swamp. what were ye doin' there? " etc. "mony a puir body has been lost in that muckle, cauld, dreary bog and never been found." when i told her i had entered it in search of plants and had been in it all day, she wondered how plants could draw me to these awful places, and said, "it's god's mercy ye ever got out." examine the details muir includes in this paragraph. which statement accurately explains how muir's response to nature compares to the log house owner's response? he is enthusiastic and in awe while she is doubtful and fearful. muir cautiously admires whereas the lady shows religious dedication. the lady is more interested in the bog while muir is fascinated by plants. they both admire nature—its intense dangers and its true treasures.

Who dies in a duel because of his pride and his anger

Which of these statements are true about pardoners tale