Give me some feedback so i can improve this paragraph. due to his endurance, roosevelt was able to persevere and eventually make a beneficial change. the quote “both his wife and mother died on the same day in 1884, though after two years roosevelt was back and ready to reach his goals ” supports this. (schuman 43) this states that theodore roosevelt’s endurance enabled him to persevere and reach his goals. this emphasizes that endurance is necessary in order to overcome hardships. this is significant because roosevelt’s endurance in the face of hardship enabled him to reveal the significance of reserving nature. thus inspiring others to support him in his goal of creating national forests, reserves and wildlife refuges. theodore roosevelt’s endurance in the face of a hardship, such as losing a loved one, allowed him to accomplish his goals.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)