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On friday, november 6, 2009, leo, a pure-bred shar-peis was born. leo was born in the spring and within a few weeks of being born could already function like a full-grown dog. though, he was born in a california junkyard; he was very kind and gentle with his brothers and sisters and soon became close with the runt in the family and him thrive. from the beginning, leo knew he was special and knew his purpose in life was to and bring joy to people. when a visitor arrived at the junkyard, his brothers ran and hid but not leo. he stayed and liked the palms of every visitor he welcomed one day a scientist for dog allergies found leo or should i say, leo found him, and it was love at first sight. the scientist's name was will, and he much enjoyed dogs and although he is allergic to dogs, leo didn’t cause him to sneeze, although with the many wrinkles in their fur, they usually tend to make people very allergic. so, will loaded leo and his family in the car and went to a friends house to give them the dogs. will kept leo after realising he felt a deep connection between them. is this using correct grammar plz answer

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Hi there!
Here is the grammar-error free version of your short-story:
On Friday, November 6, 2009, Leo, a pure-bred Shar-peis was born. Leo was born in the spring and within a few weeks of being born could already function like a full-grown dog. Though he was born in a California junkyard, he was very kind and gentle with his brothers and sisters and soon became close with the runt of the family, and that helped him thrive. From the beginning, Leo knew he was special and knew his purpose in life was to help and bring joy to people. When a visitor arrived at the junkyard, his brothers ran and hid but not Leo. He stayed and liked the palms of every visitor he welcomed One day a scientist for dog allergies found Leo or should I say, Leo found him, and it was love at first sight. The scientist's name was Will, and he much enjoyed dogs and although he is allergic to dogs, Leo didn’t cause him to sneeze, although, with so many wrinkles in their fur, they usually tend to make people very allergic. So, Will loaded Leo and his family in the car and went to a friends house to give them the dogs. Will kept Leo after realizing he felt a deep connection between them.
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assignment

analyzing characters

respond to the following questions in one paragraph for each. use specific examples from the text to support your responses.

1. there is a set of twins on the island named sam and eric. however, when describing them, golding regularly refers to them as samneric. how does this way of describing the twins relate to their behavior and the way that readers understand their characters? what examples of their behavior readers see that samneric is really the appropriate way to refer to them?

2. as the boys set out to search for the beast, ralph allows jack to lead the way, and he sinks to the back of the pack, " to have escaped responsibility for a time." what does this moment lead you to infer about ralph and about his feelings about being the group’s leader? what does this moment foreshadow?

3. while part of the party searching for the beast, simon realizes that the notion of the beast that the other boys have does not make sense. a beast sitting atop a mountain with claws, a beast who did not leave tracks, could have easily caught the twins. simon has a different picture of the beast: "there rose before his inward sight the picture of a human at once heroic and sick." how does this picture relate to the beast that samneric saw? how does it relate to what simon said earlier about the beast being "only us"?

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