Notice the repeated use of commonly used words in the paragraph below. use a thesaurus to improve the maturity of the writing by replacing five words in bold. rewrite the paragraphs. use proper spelling and grammar. last summer i read a book that i really liked. it was the first time i have ever liked a book that much. the book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. it was a good story, and i would recommend it to anyone who likes a good story.