2) What is the best explanation of what needs revising in the following sentences? # 4 Jerry does begin to change at the beginning of the story. The act that truly shows how similar the two brothers are comes near the end of the story. At the very beginning of the story Jerry tries to contribute more money to his father’s gift fund but is too late. His reaction at the end of the story shows how much he truly cares about his father. A) The first sentence does not express a complete thought B) The second sentence is jumbled and unclear C) The sentences are choppy and need to be combined D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

it creates a visual picture of the man.

it conveys what the scene sounds like.

it describes the actions of the boy.

it reveals the poet’s opinion of the characters.

it encourages readers to care for the characters.

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.