Read the sample again. Think about how you can change word choice and details to write for an older audience. It’s more important than ever for young people to help keep our planet clean. Pollution is increasing, which can cause us to be sick. Hopefully, before you throw a bottle in the trash or garbage out the window, you stop and think about how it affects the planet. Try to recycle and pick up trash to keep the earth clean from litter. How else can you and your friends help the environment?

To write for an older audience, "young people" can be changed to
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The words "us to be sick" can be changed to
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What suggestion can be added that would be suitable for an older audience?

The last sentence can be changed to

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For the first question, the answer is adolescent, juvenile, minor. The answer to the second question would be to be ill, to be sickly, to be unwell.  

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you can always look up synonyms and et straight to the point when writing and add a little bit of explanation when writing a paragraph like this. overall amazing writing.

kennedy creates personal credibility by saying he is more than fit to lead. he talks about the sixty day period that he constructed administration, and says based on that he will be an acceptable leader.

jfk has a great reputation as an american citizen. he fought in wwii, and earned the navy and marine corps medal. he saved several men on his pt-109 patrol torpedo boat after an attack by the japanese navy. he also served in congress for the 11th congressional district for massachusetts, and served three terms in the house of representatives.

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