English, 17.02.2022 18:40 jpdvolleybal8260

What do I need to fix to make it better ? There is punctuation in compound/ complex sentences, text inconsistencies, word choice and wordy sentences.

What do I need to fix to make it better ? There is punctuation in compound/ complex sentences, text

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