What does Esperanza do that makes her so guilty in “born bad”

When you go to the writing center for identifying problems in organization, logic, expression, and/or format, which of the following should happen?

Read the excerpt from chapter 6 of  animal farm. by the autumn the animals were tired but happy. they had had a hard year, and after the sale of part of the hay and corn, the stores of food for the winter were none too plentiful, but the windmill compensated for everything. it was almost half built now. how does the pacing of this passage affect the reader’s interpretation of the text? a flashback to earlier events provides a pause in the pacing to slow events down. foreshadowing of events provides information as to what will happen to the windmill. the pace of the text quickens to convey the characters’ resolve to finish the windmill. the pace of the text quickens to move the story to its climax, the completion of the windmill.

The consequence of jim smiley’s human foible adds to the story’s humor. what foible does smiley demonstrate?