His son, who had been gathering the precious objects as each was handed to him,
determined that he had worried his father
enough. He departed the badger hole and
returned to his father's tipi. As soon as he
arrived, he placed the moccasins, the
arrowhead, and the prized quiver in his
father's sleeping roll where the Old Man would
tense with fear once again upon retrieving
them that evening. Meanwhile, the Old Man
left the badger hole empty-handed but also
overwhelmed with relief and gratitude for his
safety
When the Old Man entered his tipi, his son was
waiting for him. After greeting him
respectfully, the son inquired, 'Where are
Review the paragraph at the top of page 4.
Click on the sentence in the paragraph that BEST
shows the son cares about his father, despite
wanting to trick him.

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?

He leaned his head against the wall; his eyes were shut, his hands clasped in each other, and his body seemed to be sustained in an upright position merely by the cellar-door against which he rested his left shoulder. the lethargy into which he was sunk seemed scarcely interrupted by my feeling his hand and his forehead. his throbbing temples and burning skin indicated a fever . . there was only one circumstance that hindered me from forming an immediate determination in what manner this person should be treated. my family consisted of my wife and a young child. our servant-maid had been seized, three days before, by the reigning malady, and, at her own request, had been conveyed to the hospital. we ourselves enjoyed good health, and were hopeful of escaping with our lives. our measures for this end had been cautiously taken and carefully adhered to. they did not consist in avoiding the receptacles of infection, for my office required me to go daily into the midst of them; nor in filling the house with the exhalations of gunpowder, vinegar, or tar. they consisted in cleanliness, reasonable exercise, and wholesome diet. who is the story’s first-person narrator