‘Children of school age should not be working at all. They should be focused on their school work and helpful to their parents. Working for money comes later’. Write the text for a speech to be given at a school debate in which you argue for or against this statement.

"Buildings are built on big big lands, Work is done by tiny tiny hands", yes ladies and gentlemen, I from grade is talking about children of school age who are working hard to earn money and are not being able to study. I am totally against the statement that poor families need to make their children work instead of having them study and become even more successful as labor is not the best option as technology is developing and you never know when you will be jobless.

I gave you the idea you can add on more

Explanation:

- "he is a very real person and his intent isn't to influence us vonnegut addresses this towards the end of the letter when he says, if we choose to curse, that is by our own individual means."

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.