2. Which passage shows both clarity and coherence? The farm trip was a disaster-we left at the crack of dawn, drove for four hours and spent the day hot and sweaty. The popsides they gave us were delicious.
When I saw that we were going into a field full of animals, I stopped because there were blg stearning piles everywhere. There was an ugly donkey.
I had never been on a farm, but I had visited our neighborhood's community garden many times. My mother had maintained a small plot there since I started elementary school.
The first trip of summer camp was to a farm. We had to pack a lunch. We had to ride a school bus. We left really early in the morning.