PLEASE HELP! I really need help because i am a little late:
Please tell me if my introduction paragraph is okay!:::
Introduction paragraph:
"Science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish,” said Steve Hay.

Jellyfish aren't like any other fish but are invertebrates. They can lay eggs called swarms, but if these swarms get too powerful they grow into blooms.
As a result, many students & fishermen are harmed by jellyfish because they fill up the sea & eat fish eggs and larvae making it harder for them to make a living & clog the filters of nuclear power plants.
Students in Japan decided to solve this problem... they can cook the Jellyfish with a side of caramel candy. Students in Japan are hoping this solution will work!