Can someone edit this paragraph and make it sound better?? I wrote it for my school work and I'm not really liking it and I can't make it sound better. Please and thank you.. "Focusing on your studies will lead to good grades and good grades will lead to you getting into a great college or university. By concentrating on your studies, you can get an idea of what is out in the world. It can help you can figure out what job takes what, for instance, if you’re good at math you can figure out how many careers use mathematics in their daily lives, not only that, you can manage your finances and know how much you’re going to have once you pay your taxes and other stuff. If you live with a roommate, you can divide the expense and calculate out how much you and your roommate both have to pay."