This part of a transcript from a classroom videotape needs sixteen additional commas. Write it correctly.
Example: Plankton tiny organisms fill the waters.
Plankton, tiny organisms, fill the waters.

Ms. Lorca:

Sam:

Ms. Lorca:
Irina:

Ms. Lorca:

Irina:
Ms. Lorca:

Do plants and animals live in
the polar regions Sam?
Well the polar seas are full of
life. Plankton tiny organisms fill
the waters. Plankton include krill
which are very small shrimp-like
animals. The krill are food for

Krill

many larger sea animals. Both polar regions I believe, have
large populations of seals and whales.
Irina can many plants survive in the Antarctic?
No few plants can in my opinion, survive the hard cold of
the South Pole.
Part of the Arctic region around the North Pole melts for a
short time each year however. Some plants Irina grow there
during this short summer season. All of the plants are
perennials plants that last from year to year.
What kinds of plants, Ms. Lorca?
There are for example lichens, shrubs, mosses, sedges, and
grasses.

in dubai we don't have those but i would love to try it lol

i'm ganna take my horse lol jk anyway bow! hello

yes, because if hes blind not deaf

they fear for their lives

in the short story the slip-over sweater by jesse stuart, the main character and narrator shan is friends with grace, an intelligent girl he has known since childhood and with whom he used to be in love.

at the beginning of the story, shan believes he’s no longer in love with grace, but loves jo-anne instead. in order to buy a slip-over sweater and have jo-anne wear it so that the other students would know she loved him too, shan takes a loan at the bank.

while jo-anne is wearing shan’s sweater, his friend grace starts to wear another popular boy’s one, roy’s sweater. because of that, the other students begin to pay attention to grace and compliment her perseverance and effort. they admire her for walking 5 miles to school every day, despite the weather, and still getting the best grades. shan, who knows all of that for a fact, says, as the narrator, ‘and i knew she had the durability and the toughness of a storm-battered mountain oak.’ he compares his friend’s strength – not only physical, but also of character – to an oak tree, whose wood is known for being sturdy.

as the story goes on, shan changes his behavior out of concern for the debt he has to pay at the bank. his new girlfriend jo-anne never asks him what is wrong nor offers any sort of . instead, she breaks up with shan for not being as fun as she thought he was supposed to be. grace, however, not only asks about shan’s problem, but him make the money he needs. shan can’t but notice how different the girls are and what a wonderful person grace is.   even though he used to find jo-anne prettier at the beginning of the story, he now says, ‘grace was as beautiful as our mountain was in april, prettier than a blossom of wild phlox or a mountain daisy.’ his comparing grace to a mountain or something that exists on a mountain (such as a mountain oak or daisy) certainly has important meaning since shan loves the mountain and everything about it and he knows the mountain thoroughly. shan also loves and knows grace as completely as he does the mountain.