I watched the timer counting down. My stomach rumbled I was hungry. I tapped my foot impatiently my food still wasn’t ready. A delicious smell filled the air I heard satisfying popping sounds my mouth watered. The microwave beeped I yanked open the door. I stuffed the popcorn into my mouth. 1. Copy the paragraph into the text box. Rewrite the paragraph so there are no run-ons, but here’s the catch: you have to follow these rules!

Add at least three conjunctions like “and,” “so,” or “because.”
Add no more than two periods.
Add commas where necessary.
When you add or change punctuation, make sure you capitalize letters correctly!

its everything except for telling nonfiction and using first person

the right ones are in bold.

daintly refers to the fact she was reaching for what she ate, not necessarily what she is like.

greatest charm as in she possessed (=had) the greatest charm.

pleasant (her demeanor)

speaking (of her sensibility)

dead refers to the hypothetical mouse.

bleeding refers to the hypothetical mouse.

the correct answers are:

c. “never in the history of his people had a man married a woman who spoke a different tongue.”

d. “‘it has never been heard,’ was the verdict of an old man speaking a few weeks later.”

e. “this man had come with others to commiserate with okeke.”