You have read the passage from Freckles by Gene Stratton-Porter. Write an original narrative that continues the story, describing what happens after Freckles is hired for the job. Write your narrative using first person point of view with either Freckles or McLean as the narrator. Provide details from the passage to support your answer.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

walter refusing lindner's offer.

whatever is after like is what is being compared they are comparing bumping into you like they are scared to catch germs you have and to you being contagious