50 POINTS make a persuasive essay about why phones SHOULDENT be used in school use a counterclaim and a rebuttal

THING TO INCLUDE IN EACH PARAGRAPH
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pathos
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(for each one you in the the paragraph put in bold so ik)

introduction
hook
claim
explanation
(use each of these in the introduction)

body par 1,

body par 2,

body par 3,

counter argument
Topic sentence /Counter claim

Reason people might think this

Conclusion

Claim restated
Ending remarks

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Explanation:

yeahh

People in many schools regularly sneak around on their cell phones, trying to hide them from teachers or administrators. Cell phones were originally against school rules. Honestly it makes a lot of since for students not to be able to use their cell phones during school hours. Cell phones should be banned in schools because they distract students, allow cheating in Schools, and they can be dangerous. Cell phones distract students in school. Whenever people text in class it gets other people’s attention, which makes it hard for students to learn. Also if it goes off in class it can cause the teacher to stop teaching and have everyones attention on that cell phone (Armstrong).

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Most of the time when you give kids an inch they will take a mile, which means if you gibe kids the ability to use their phones they will not just use it for research. Cell phones are dangerous. Cell phones can put off radiation, which means that cell

Phones can cause brain tumors or acoustic nueromas (Colipie). If students are allowed to use their cell phone during school it will make it easier of a chance for kids to get some type of  cancer. A study has been shown that cell phones affect men’s sperm quality. It could affect having a healthy baby (Colipie). That has nothing to do with school but cell phones are bad for everyone and they can make some people quit caring about school because they are so addicted.

Explanation:

its c because its his point of view