1. Kelly Sly has given this story to her editor, who finds new mistakes—seven to be precise! 2. Can you find them all? Write the change on the lines below.
3. The capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling, and sentence structure are correct. You need to change the
ideas in the story [revise).
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I visited the harbor on Saturday, September 31. I was after a gang of smugglers operating out of a
four-engine sailboat docked at pier 3. A quick view of the vessel showed the anchor safely pulled up. I
walked up the gangplank onto the deck and looked for somewhere to hide. A barrel full of ropes seemed
ideal, so I climbed in and waited. It wasn't long before some men appeared. "We share the loot three
ways, like we always do," said one. The others nodded sullenly. Unfortunately, I chose that moment to
Sneeze. They were onto me immediately, dragging me from the tight funnel. "A spy! Throw her
overboard!" cried the one with the black long-sleeved shirt and the tattoos on his back. "Look behind
you!" I screamed, and as they turned, I dove into the murky river. Unfortunately, the smugglers spotted
me and finished me with a fatal shot.
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He leaned his head against the wall; his eyes were shut, his hands clasped in each other, and his body seemed to be sustained in an upright position merely by the cellar-door against which he rested his left shoulder. the lethargy into which he was sunk seemed scarcely interrupted by my feeling his hand and his forehead. his throbbing temples and burning skin indicated a fever . . there was only one circumstance that hindered me from forming an immediate determination in what manner this person should be treated. my family consisted of my wife and a young child. our servant-maid had been seized, three days before, by the reigning malady, and, at her own request, had been conveyed to the hospital. we ourselves enjoyed good health, and were hopeful of escaping with our lives. our measures for this end had been cautiously taken and carefully adhered to. they did not consist in avoiding the receptacles of infection, for my office required me to go daily into the midst of them; nor in filling the house with the exhalations of gunpowder, vinegar, or tar. they consisted in cleanliness, reasonable exercise, and wholesome diet. who is the story’s first-person narrator

After the doctors question their authenticity, the duke suggest that he and the king leave immediately with the money they have already stolen. why does the king refuse to leave

Based on the excerpt, readers can conclude that odysseus’s men enjoy their leisure time. appreciate their jobs. respect their leader. forge close friendships.