"Mr. Paul Candor is who I'm looking for, said the man. 'Is that you? "Oh, yes, sit. That's me. You must be my tutor, said Paul, in a voice that didn't hide
his skepticism
"Yes, I'm Mt. Valentine. Let's get to work
Paul welcomed Mr. Valentine into the house and they sat at the kitchen table and
began to work
When an author introduces a new character in a short story, he or she must quickly establish the
character's key traits. In this portion of the narrative, the author misses an opportunity to develop Mr.
Valentine. Rewrite this section of the story to better establish Mr. Valentine as a complex character. (15
points)
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