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English, 29.09.2021 23:30 Kimb9820

1. Kelly Sly has given this story to her editor, who finds new mistakes seven to be precise! 2. Can you find them all? Write the change on the lines below.
3. The capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling, and sentence structure are correct. You need to change the
ideas in the story (revise).
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I visited the harbor on Saturday, September 31. I was after a gang of smugglers operating out of a
four-engine sailboat docked at pier 3. A quick view of the vessel showed the anchor safely pulled up. I
walked up the gangplank onto the deck and looked for somewhere to hide. A barrel full of ropes seemed
ideal, so I climbed in and waited. It wasn't long before some men appeared. "We share the loot three
ways, like we always do," said one. The others nodded sullenly. Unfortunately, I chose that moment to
sneeze. They were onto me immediately, dragging me from the tight funnel. "A spy! Throw her
overboardl" cried the one with the black long sleeved shirt and the tattoos on his back. "Look behind
youl" I screamed, and as they turned, I dove into the murky river. Unfortunately, the smugglers spotted
me and finished me with a fatal shot.


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