IS this a good introduction? Yes or no?

Here is the prompt...
Based on your research, identify and analyze a human rights issue in your novel and show how it relates to real-life issues and affects people within the United States and one other country.

Here is my answer...
Did you know that an estimated 48,000 children who try to immigrate to the United States from both Central America and Mexico enter illegally each year do not have a parent with them? According to counselors, most make the long and dangerous journey to see their mothers. Most adults come for one reason; escaping a terrible life and getting a job in America to provide for their families. This affects multiple countries, groups of people, and poses a threat to basic human rights.
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It is a very good but maybe add a quote

Explanation:

i would lay on the ground, and wait for the earth to simply take me back!

- sincerely, ouma

gilgamesh is an epic hero from birth, as he's brought to the world by the hand of several gods who shaped him with the goal of saving humanity. there's a passage from the text that reads "the glorious sun shamash bestowed upon him glory; adad the terrible god of storms bestowed upon him courage. the great gods perfected his magnificence beyond all others, terrible like the great wild bull". this is a great example that show some of the super-human qualities that the gods gave gilgamesh upon his birth.

as gilgamesh grows he has to face many challenges that put his heroism to task. the courage he displays along the way, prove that he's ready to live up to the godly qualities brought upon him. at one point he has to overcome a wild beast by the name of hubamba "whose roar is a flood, whose mouth is fire, whose breath is death", as the text reads. the actions taken by gilgamesh, beating the beast with the use of his super-human force, examplify why he shoud be thought of as an epic hero.

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