The next two passages have the topic sentence underlined. With that controlling idea in mind, find the one sentence that has been inserted that does not belong there because it breaks the unity. Cross out or highlight the sentence. An overwhelming light swept me.

My resolution was instantaneous. I would do the same. I would make my legs strong on the foothills. Thus I started my treks and used the foothills as one uses weights or bars in a gymnasium. These early hikes put me on intimate terms with the hills. First I tried to go up the hills without stopping. When I conquered that, I tried to go up without a change of pace. When that was achieved, I practiced going up not only without a change of pace but whistling as I went.

Ineed . identify the item that shows sharp and vivid details rather than vague and general ones (put a or b for your answer.) a. my brother doesn’t know the value of money. he buys new things, even though his old ones are still perfectly good. he recently took his girlfriend on a trip. they stayed at a nice hotel and ate all their meals out. while they were there, he proposed marriage to her and gave her an engagement ring. b. my brother bought a new car this year, even though his last car was only three years old and running well. he recently took his girlfriend to hawaii for a week. they stayed at a hilton hotel right on the beach and ate dinner by candlelight in elegant gourmet restaurants. on their last night there, he surprised her with a two-carat diamond ring.