​The parking situation on campus needs to be improved immediately. It is impossible to find a spot during the peak hours of the day. Many students have to allow extra time to find parking if they don’t want to be late for class. Further, spots are often taken by cars without parking permits, which is not fair to students who pay for parking. Therefore, the administration should make it a priority to solve the college’s parking problem. Rewrite this paragraph using paragraph devlopment , more evidence, more details , better vocabulary

Me read the letter. dear aunt mary, you for the wonderful painting. you are so talented! i was thrilled that you chose to paint horses. you must have remembered that i was crazy about horses when i was a little kid—and i still love them. i have hung the painting in my room so that i can see it every morning when i wake up. your loving niece, celia what makes this letter appropriate for its intended audience? it is written from the third-person point of view. it is concise and impersonal. its sentence structure is varied. its language is informal.

30 points and brainliest what can you surmise about keats’s theories of art by reading “ode on a grecian urn”? no multiple choice

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive eassy: ideas, orginization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions? (provide textual evidence from your persuasive essay to support your answer.)