The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding
adopting families for all animals brought to or left at the shelter.
Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the paragraph while maintaining
meaning? (3 points)
The 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again to raise funds for the county animal shelter,
which is marking its third year for finding adopting families for all animals brought to the
shelter
The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county
animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year for finding adopting families for all
shelter animals.
The 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal
shelter, which is marking its third year in a row for finding adopting families for all animals
brought to or left at the shelter.
O The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county
animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding adopting families for
all animals at the shelter.
PI

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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your answer is b. "with strong wording encouraging readers to take action."

why did you delete the answer?